I think I have finally cracked the troublesome scene in Chapter 6.
Can I get a Huzzah?
I’ll assume that was a yes.
The problem was my approach to the scene. I was using the wrong point of view. Way too removed fro my MC. So, this morning(?) I will attempt the scene again. Wish me luck.
In the Trenches: Aha!

2 responses to “In the Trenches: Aha!”
Huzzah indeed! Good luck to you –
Thank you! This one scene has been kicking me at will for weeks.